Mine – 7

7
early mornings
before the sun rises
she burrows beneath
the covers
to wake him
taking him between full lips
she beckons him
awake and so hard
within

*This is for National Poetry Month, where I’m writing on a theme. Inspired by Álvaro de la Herrán‘s video for GQ Spain called Mine

3 thoughts on “Mine – 7

  1. You handle sensuality with great mental imagery and very few words. For my own tastes, I prefer that over rolling paragraphs of hyperbole and expletives.

      1. Yes! properly applied, expletives are better than coffee for opening the eyes. 🙂

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